Thursday, October 11, 2007

PLN #7

The article I read was called Phone Searches Spark Protest. I found this article in the Denver Post. This article is talking about how one school, Monarch High School, is not following the law of the state and school district. It is also breaking the rights the students have. Examples of what this school is doing that is so poorly, is that they would take away students cell phones and break in and read all their text messages. That is against their right of privacy. Also the school keeps accusing students of doing bad things like smoking in the parking lots. My opinuin on this, is that schools need to respect the rules of privacy and to respect that kids can do whatever they would like as long as it is not on school property. I did more research after reading this article and found out that reading text messages and make transcripts of them is a felony. This means that the principle, assistant principle, and the teacher who accused this student can be sued.

22 comments:

alexe said...

you spoke very clearly and loud, and made good eye contact. Very good.

kellyS said...

Lauren, you did a good job speaking very clearly and fluently. Maybe try and not read from your paper as much. I like how you gave examples and went into detail. Good job on explaining your point of view and giving your opinions.

adama said...

I think you did a good job. You knew what your infomation was and you did only read from the page. You did look down a lot and need to look at you audiance more.

seand said...

Lauren, good job on your presentation. You were prepared and you spoke clearly but next time try to look up from your paper a little more. Other than that it was good.

berekm said...

I think you did a good job but you should make more eye contact maybe. I agree wit what you were saying and that global warning should be stopped kind of. So you did good and knew what you were saying and you spoke clearly.

brandonh2011 said...

you did a good job but you shouldnt just read of the paper and you spoke very clear good job

seanb said...

Lauren, you did a very good job. you had a very strong clear voice. You need to look up more but besides that you had a strong thought out presentation. GOOD JOB!

samh said...

Lauren, I though you did a very good job! You spoke clearly and didn't seem nervous. I like how you shared you opinion on each of you posts. Good Job!

Averee said...

You did really well on your presentation. Good job on incorporating multiple examples into your presentation. You used more than one PLN in your presentation, good job. Try to use a little more eye contact, you didn't look up very often.

Anna K said...

Lauren, you did a good job! Maybe you could make more eye contact and not read from your paper so often but you did a very good job!

Josh TS said...

You had a phenomenal priesentation but you relied too much on your notes

Jackie N said...

Lauren, you had a good summary of your articles, and a good explanation of your opinions. You did a good job!

mmg said...

Laurene, you did a good job on your presentations and keeping eye contact with the class. I also thought you did a good job on connecting yourself to the articles and asking questions to the class.

joeyw said...

Lauren I thought you did a very good job with your presentations and had alot of grest and descriptive examples.

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Xavia H2011 said...

Lauren, good ideas about polution in the world and how to avoid it. I also agree with you about how some students should not be paid for grades. IT also helps to get information for the future in college. GREAT JOB!

annies said...

Lauren! Good job not talking too fast. MORE EYE CONTACT GIRL. I agree with the Global Warming thing, it makes me sick how bad our air is. I recycle as much as possible. Global Warming is bad, really bad. And I agree with you about the getting paid for good grades thing. I think you are right about the teachers needing to teach their students how to manage a credit card. I think that people should get less SUV's, which guzzle gas, and say yes to little, more gas efficent. And I agree with Berry about the carpool thing. Good job!!

angelicao said...

you did a good job at explaining all your entries, you looked at the audience, and you spoke clearly. Very good job

carterw said...
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carterw said...

Lauren, nice job you spoke very clearly and got straight to the point and it was very interesting.

laurenp said...

Lauren, you did a great job with your presentation. I like how you related to your topics.
Great Job!

DennisRocks said...

Good job laurene, you did a great job. Next time, try not to rely on your paper so much.